Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Is this an end, or just a new beginning?




Is this an end, or just a new beginning?


An end to a long lasting relation, or is it time to make new relations,


An end to the love dwelling inside, or is it time to spread across that love;


An end to the only possession owned, or is it time to let things go;


An end to the daily meetings, or is it time to be with yourself?


An end to the care for the only person you cared about, or is it time to care for the humanity,


An end to the fights for expectations, or is it time to build up new expectations from life,


An end to the endless waits to be one someday, or is it time to find union in self,


An end to the changes made constantly within, or is it time to be you again;


An end to the prayers made, or is it time to pray even harder;


An end to the madness done several times, or is it time to be sane all the time;


An end to the belief that things will work out, or is time to accept the reality;


An end to the time spent together, or is it time to just cherish those memories;


An end to the dreams seen together, or is it time to live new dreams!

14 comments:

  1. Nice! I found this really Motivating. Speaks a lot about the true meaning of 'moving on'.

    Though there is no rhyme in poem, the flow is not bad...
    However, you can work a little on the meter of the poem to make it sound even better.

    Anyways, its a great beginning for your poetical talent :)
    Looking forward to read more of your works!

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  2. Do share the answer, when you find them... will post them to my life too...

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  4. wow beautifully written. u've described the feelings quite perfectly. though there is a lot of hurt, there is hope and optimism, which is really good. that's the way to a better happier life! wish you loads of love and happiness. :)

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  5. Hey Nikita,
    Really Really heart touching words for someone who is going through the same situation.
    A big inspiration for me. Keep writing.

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  6. Thanks Nilay, Shilpa and Bina....

    @Bina...i hope all is well with u...

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  7. Very Very nice !!
    Keep going on, all the best !!

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  8. thank you... ms or mr. anonymous...

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  9. Hi there. Good to see you amalgamate photography with poetry. Hope to see more of such creations from your side :)

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  10. hey thanks jay for the encouragement... i dont usually write poetries, this was just an exception :)

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  11. Well all i can say is that u never when an exception might change the course of ur life in to a completely new direction.....what do u say....:)

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  12. I am speechless... and am cursing myself as to why didnt I read this before!!!

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  13. pal...that is a huge compliment.. thank you...

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  14. very well written... well done!

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